pp. 24, 25, 27... the color of the bridge's stone is variously described as either "green-grey" or "grey-green."
p. 38. Sec. 11.4 "He has one of the Eight Serpent Eye Talismen."
-- whereas on p. 47 "talismans" is used as the plural form.
p. 39. Sec. 11.6 "If questioned closely about the mail, be becomes a little nervous..."
-- "be" should be "he"
p. 41. Intro "... to the GM is advised to read..."
-- "to" should probably read "though"
p. 60. Scene 1 "... he saw some people wandering about a rocky area in the south, as he came up the"
-- unfinished sentence, "Steppe Highway" might complete it.
p. 61. Scene 4 "... Reif burn the symbol of the Eye..."
-- "burn" should either be "burns" or "will burn" depending on the tense you want.
p. 64. Kester's Goals "... Kester might begin to see them as less tools to be used, but instead as..."
-- should probably read "might begin to see them less as tools to be used"
p. 74. The chart here lists Pel Frankis' hair color as Brown, however p. 38 describes his hair color as red/read.