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Offline PhillipAEllis

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Re: Nanoing RPGs
« Reply #20 on: November 23, 2012, 07:29:46 PM »
I like what I've read: you've gone straight into the action, and there is no grating infodumps here. The use of dialogue is skilled, and I have yet to pick up any flaws in it, and the central premise is intriguing. In short, I want to read more, and that's a hard thing for most genre books, nowadays, since I've basically glutted on them for some time.
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Re: Nanoing RPGs
« Reply #21 on: November 23, 2012, 10:36:09 PM »
Quote from: chippermonks on November 23, 2012, 07:01:48 PM
If you check out my page, I have chapter 1 of my story posted (which reads like a short story as its more of a setting setter)

Re-posted for ease of copying:

Shadow over Headquarters: inspired by Shades of Darkness


 I hope you do not mind by I copied and pasted it into a Word Doc for my easy reading. If this is not ok let me know and I will get rid of it ASAP.
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Re: Nanoing RPGs
« Reply #22 on: November 25, 2012, 04:29:43 AM »
Quote from: PhillipAEllis on November 23, 2012, 07:29:46 PM
I like what I've read: you've gone straight into the action, and there is no grating infodumps here. The use of dialogue is skilled, and I have yet to pick up any flaws in it, and the central premise is intriguing. In short, I want to read more, and that's a hard thing for most genre books, nowadays, since I've basically glutted on them for some time.

Well thank you, like I said its a rough draft, so thinks may still change here and there. 5 more days till the deadline and here I am trying to distract myself in anyway possible! I've got a good chunk of words left to go :/

Quote from: markc on November 23, 2012, 10:36:09 PM
Quote from: chippermonks on November 23, 2012, 07:01:48 PM
If you check out my page, I have chapter 1 of my story posted (which reads like a short story as its more of a setting setter)

Re-posted for ease of copying:

Shadow over Headquarters: inspired by Shades of Darkness


 I hope you do not mind by I copied and pasted it into a Word Doc for my easy reading. If this is not ok let me know and I will get rid of it ASAP.
MDC

I don't mind at all.
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