Marc and Providence: Thanks for the consrtructive critisism!
lvl 14. Sunstroke- Make reduction to %Act based on the amount of RR failure. I believe this is typical of many RM RR's. Good idea! 10%/10fail, or something
lvl 8. Sunclock - I recommend moving this to lvl 1. and have it require no PP. Then move the other spells up one until lvl 8. If it still requires PP, the caster can maybe extrapolate Latitude and Longitude.. I'll have to check that, forgot the math. Done!
On the sun list I am not so sure about the rank 19, 20, 25 and 50 rank spells. They just do not seem to fit.Hmm.. They are all supposed to have something directly to do with the sun. The eclipses might need some more thinking, I agree. The thought was that once the spell caster (of the realm of channeling) is sufficiently in contact with his deity (e.g. the sun) he may summon an eclipse. The lower level is only an illusion, and will serve mosty to impress others and make changes in light conditions. The 50th level spell was thought be summon a real eclipse, in which the sun goes away and enegry is transferred to the caster, bestowing upon him great powers.
The list also in general seems a bit under powered but that is dependent on your game and setting. You think so? We'll Im glad to hear that. I was afraid the opposite would be the case. These lists are not supposed to shift the power level of the casters in any way. They will get access, when/if the upper level clergy decides they are worthy, and the lists will be in addition to the numerous other, powerful lists they already have available.
Also what is the purpose of sacrificing PP's to the Sun or Moon? (if you do not mind)The purpose is, of course, pleasing the deities. This cult is scared shitless that the sun will leave them, and render thweir world a dark, cold and barren place. By offering their PPs they ensure the sun is pleased and the circle of nature continues. Now, there just, possibly might be some small, twist here, but I'm not really at liberty to tell, as the players surely are reading this
Will you make the lists for the other eventualis as well?@Hubba: Yes, I will be making a list calles Natures Wrath, which will deal with earth quakes, volcanos, hurricanes etc, but as thing are this will be for NPCs exclusively... Sleep wary!