- A clear distinction between Player section and GM section.
- All the stuff in the HB to be included in the main book, as well as the main mystery regarding the Dragon and Cyrads and Saena at least explained for GM use.
- Stats of one Cyrad, one Dragon, one Saena to have as an example.
- Every mystery(Ischea, the Tears, why the Cyrads left, etc) to have at least a superficial explanation for the GMs.
- Conflicts and details about the Elves nations, why are the Desnian so militarized before the Devastation? How can they be most powerful nation without producing goods and why do Janiel supply them weapons? Basically everything that can lead to sources of conflict is useful.
- Also, it's been a while since I took a class in geography, but it strikes me as weird to see a river flowing from one sea to another without a mountain or anything. The Camal Sea doesn't seem to be fed by rivers, which is fine because it could be subterranean rivers. The problem is that, quite the opposite of what's normal, the rivers Tanolain and Marisant flow from the sea to the ocean, which is odd. I know the Camal Sea is in a highland, but I still struggle to find a real world example of something like that(a river originating in a sea), and also the water springing from that sea should be salty. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong, but my basic knowledge is that all rivers flow to the sea, not from a sea.