Critique Wanted: Onaviu Char Gen

Started by arakish, February 27, 2014, 12:57:53 PM

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arakish

February 27, 2014, 12:57:53 PM Last Edit: January 25, 2020, 02:54:11 PM by arakish
Here is my latest world I have been working on.

Onaviu Character Generation (removed URL since rewritten)

I do have one player helping me out some with this; however, I feel I need a larger audience to also critique it for me.

Special Note: This is loosely based on the RMU system, with some RM2 thrown in.  I am waiting for the next beta version to see about any changes/updating.  There is one update being worked out.  I will actually be using the temp/pot stat thing after all.  Still working on it.

What I want is a critique of what we have created so far.  Look for any holes we may have missed.  Also realize I have made changes to the standard RMU Public Playtest v1.0 RAW.

Thanks for your valuable time for the critiquing.

rmfr
"Beware those who would deny you access to information, for they already dream themselves your master."
— RMF Runyan in Sci-Fi RPG session (GM); quoted from the PC game SMAC.