Nicholas,
Yes I did like what I saw and here are the other things I noticed.
Pg 28, Table 4.1 chart needs to be changed so the line covers 3 columns instead of 2.
Pg 34, you may want to give page # where you can find Genetic talents instead of just Chp. 7. But IMO this is no biggie.
Pg 43, Bottom of the chart info is very blurry and I could not read it in standard zoom.
Pg 59, IMO it would be nice if the cost of the talent was under the title instead of at the end.
Pg 60, Agile Defense needs to be bold.
Pg 65, Firearms and Energy Weapons need to be bold like Bows.
Pg 72, need to fix encumbrance chart.
I also noticed the problem with the formula where it was cut off but I did not write down the page # where it was.
MDC