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Critique Wanted: Onaviu Char Gen
« on: February 27, 2014, 12:57:53 PM »
Here is my latest world I have been working on.

Onaviu Character Generation (removed URL since rewritten)

I do have one player helping me out some with this; however, I feel I need a larger audience to also critique it for me.

Special Note: This is loosely based on the RMU system, with some RM2 thrown in.  I am waiting for the next beta version to see about any changes/updating.  There is one update being worked out.  I will actually be using the temp/pot stat thing after all.  Still working on it.

What I want is a critique of what we have created so far.  Look for any holes we may have missed.  Also realize I have made changes to the standard RMU Public Playtest v1.0 RAW.

Thanks for your valuable time for the critiquing.

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