I really like those Psi rules. But I don't understand some of the examples and explanations.
One issue is the Nature of Psi at the beginning of the chapter. You have three agencies which interact: mind, brain, and outside world. If the mind (or consciousness) influences both, the physical brain and the outside world - then I would guess that the mind brings forth the effects of Psi. Therefore, I was very surprised that certain areas of the brain are made responsible for Psi powers.
If you assume that mind can influence matter, the brain can be treated just like every other physical object. Then you don?t need any of the quantum physics assumptions, because quantum physics can only explain interactions between matter and other matter. When the elusive mind influences matter, you don?t need any explanation at all. No one knows what mind is, so we can just assume that it does what it does.
But why not get rid of the difficult philosophy of mind and just talk about the brain? The brain can interact with the rest of the body and the outside world not only by sensory perception and motor acts, but also by the mechanism of coupled quantums. There are such things as coupled quantums and there are are lot of quantum couples of which one is in the outside world and one is in the brain. This is a reasonable explanation for Psi effects in the physical world which sounds scientific enough for a science fiction setting.
Another thing I found confusing are the examples on the next page.
John has several options and the DP costs for those options are computed and compared. When I first read it, I got the impression that John gets the same talents for different amounts of DP. But he gets very different things, so I think it?s not justified to directly compare the costs and talk about him saving 20 DPs, etc.
The first example is unrealistic, because he has already chosen to take the Adept profession. Therefore, he doesn?t have to pay for all three talents. Maybe it would be better to show in the first example what the costs would be if he took a different profession.
In the second and third example, he not only saves DPs but also gets different numbers of Active Psionic Field Talents. In the second example, he got three psionic fields with two active tiers in the first field for a total cost of 45 DPs. In the last example, he not only spends 15 DPs less, but he also gets one active tier less. So, nothing saved compared to the second example. The example suggests that he saves more.
Another, more general problem with the examples: They already talk about Active Psionic Fields before the concept of active fields is introduced (in the next paragraph). Maybe the examples should appear a little later.
Well, I know how the examples were meant ? but only after reading them several times. At first read, having no examples at all would have been less confusing.
If I appear to be hypercritical, please tell me so. Maybe it?s just because I?m no native speaker that I have trouble understanding some things.