On p121 it stated that you can enchant an "of the shelf" item after it was created. This goes against most Fantasy tropes of how a magic item is created with arcane knowledge about smithing and so on. It just feels off "Hey Mark, when you pick up your fixed armor, please get some of the shelfs swords for us to enchant for our adventure."
That is just on example and is easily fixed, of course. I will write a bigger review when I am through the whole book on Drivethru. Let's see how I feel about it after I read it all.